Magazine Advert Second Draft:

After talking to our teacher, he advised us to change and add a couple of things to our advert. We added logos to our advert to fit with the typical conventions of a magazine advert. After, re-evaluating our advert with our teacher, he advised us to move the logos as well as change the sizing of them in order for them to fit on the page neatly. By completing this we have decided as a group that we are happy with our finished piece.